I thought you did a very good job writing your story. The part that I like was when you explained the code of conduct in your gang(family) I thought that was kool,it was all positive things. I did not find any errors.
keep up the good work!
Short and spicy! A lot in two paragraphs good job! Basically in two paragraph I can see more than two years of your life, that two minute of automatic discover of you being "black" as you enter the US. I also liked how you listed the roles of your family gang. It shows the type of person you are. You also listed the roles of the gang society (of the US) placed you in. It's like who you think you are verses who they say you are. Good job!
in this present time people are going into gangs and they don't even know. when u walk inside a school or your job for the first time you going to find a group of people that match your personalty and sit with them from that moment you are in a gang